2014年9月14日 星期日

Assignment 2 - Writing Practice

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Don’t Take Lift Alone


There was a famous|horrible|suspicious legend|tale|rumor in this shabby|odd|old building|edifce|mansion, a man|cleaner|security finished|did|ended searching|checking|monitoring every floor|offices|rooms, then took lift on 14th Floor, lift opened and closed. On next day, someone found|noticed|discovered he was dead|passed_out|killed with unknown|mysterious|strange cause|reason in the lift, and his watch stopped|freezed|remained on 3:15am . Therefore, none dared take lift alone after 3:15am, especially on 14th Floor. One night, Norman did|investigated|analyzed work|job|stuff as usual|normal|custumal, he was the only person in slightly|very|absolutely dark|quiet|silent office|workplace|environment, although he not reaaly scared|believed|trusted the legend|tale|rumor, he never left after 3:15am for safe. Norman|He was tireless|hardworking|smart, he always stayed|slept|worked in the office, which on 14th Floor. When Norman|he looked_at|glance|spotted the clock|watch|monitor, the time is 1:00am, workload|job|task was quite large|heavy|demanding, he kept focusing on his computer|monitor|files|iPad|laptop. Time flies, Norman drank|made|tasted a cup of  instant|high_class|burning coffee|tea|milktea, he back to his seat|position|place, the time is 2:00am. “Tik Tak Tik Tak Tik Tak…” , the time is 3:10am, Norman hasn’t noticed|watched the clock|time, but luckily|fortunately, he tried|prepared|decided to tidy_up|pack|wrap his bag|belongings|material|files. Norman|he left|hurried_out|escaped and locked the office’s door|entrance. Norman pressed lift button, lift door opened gently|slowly|quietly, he entered|got_in|went_into the dull|deadful|ghastly empty|hollow|vacent container|cuboid|tin. Then Norman pressed ground floor button, lift door closed, the number was decreasing|dropping|moving_downward on the monitor, “Whirr whirr whirr” fan was rotating|working|turning loudly|awfully|horribly on the top of lift|Norman’s_head, suddenly|unexpectedly|surprisingly, lift stopped at 4th Floor, he felt strange|odd|different, because seldom|rare|no people took lift so late except the security, lift door opened, a shadow|silhouette of person was standing|hiding in the darkness, so Norman could not figure|notice|see the person. “Do you take lift?”, Norman asked|said, he didn’t_know|questioned|confused why that person not came_in|took|entered lift, no answer|response|sound from that shadow|silhouette, Norman pressed the closed button. When the lift door almost closed fully|completely|wholly, “The lift is so crowded|full_of_people|overload”, the person said.

Another Writing Practice - Rainy Day

She|Jessica ran|walked away from her house, who might be the only person love her, but she decided|wanted|had to be alone, no more reliance|demand|support from her mother. The sky was strange|unexpected, shiny|bright|gleaming sun was gone too, rain started|began dropping|crying|falling heavily|slightly|abruptly. She|Jessica was_soaked|got_wet, her heart was confused|moody|frustrated as dark|blur cloud, she quickened|speeded_up|accerated her step and hid under playground_slide|tree. When she looked|glanced|viewed around this park|place|area, she remembered|recalled|thought the day father left|hurt|abandoned her without a reason|message|word.

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